Tuesday 19 May 2015

Champion Class

Champion class

Our class had to write a poem about a moment that took 10 seconds. We had to include strong verbs, a new action on every line, all the lines had to start with a Capital letter. Here is my poem, I hope you enjoy reading it!!! 

There are two left in the ring
Gradually moving him into a halt
Squeezing on the reins
Wrap my legs around him
Try to stay seated in the saddle
Eyes turn to the judge
Staring
Keep moving “You can do this”
Waits
Breathes
Scared
Nudges him over
Hurry up I think
We can do this

The pony
Walks
Halts
Happy
Floppy
Wobbles
Everyone with eager eyes
Waits
           Waits
                      and Waits
Hesitates to move on…
We got champion!!!
YAY

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